| Topic Sentences = topic + controlling statement |
| Suppose you are to write very brief responses (100-150
words) "inspired" by the following photos. Suppose you are to make a
point and then support it in your essay, a very typical writing assignment.
What would you write about? Write five TOPIC SENTENCES, one for each
of the following photos. Please read the three topic sentences about "Kanchana" in
bold blue on the right and note how it is possible to focus on any number of
items surrounding this photo. The topic sentences themselves are 20, 20, and
18 words. Each topic sentence is followed by a short "definition" of
the topic and controlling statement. Note the
controlling statement always points to a list. Your objective is to write one possible topic sentence for each
of the five photos below.
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Three Example Topic Sentences:
I'll never forget the events that occurred the first night I met the lady of my dreams, Kanchana, in Bangkok. Topic = the first night When you see this topic sentence, you know you will read a short story about the events that occurred the first night. It will probably be in chronological order. It will probably be a comedy. Kanchana is by now accustomed to the routine of getting dressed for her daily "performances" on the streets of Bangkok. Topic = getting dressed When you see this topic sentence, you will probably expect to read about the process of Kanchana's owner getting her dressed for her performances. The steps will probably be in chronological order. Kanchana is very professional in the methods she uses in begging for money on the streets of Bangkok. Topic = Kanchana is a professional When you see this topic sentence, you can expect an explanation of HOW Kanchana is a professional. What steps does she take? The methods may be in chronological order, but they may also be different tactics completely which would be "topical" development. It would, of course, be possible to write more topic sentences. For example, if I knew more about the genus of Kanchana, I could develop a topic sentence about endangered species, the numbers in captivity, their habitat, etc. Always include a topic sentence for all your essays and reports. A topic sentence makes it easier for you to write (once you decide your topic and how you want to deal with it). A topic sentence also makes it easier for the reader to understand the point of your essay. Obviously, this assignment will require a creative imagination, so have fun doing it!
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